My goals for this essay is to revise my quote integrations. I have difficulty incorporating my quotes from outside sources and relating them to the topic of my essay. To achieve this goal I plan to:
1. Read my peers comments on my draft
2. Read Professor Emerson’s comments on my draft when choosing quotes to integrate into my essay
3. Re-reading the essay of Armstong.
4. Listen to the podcasts I choose to quote again.
5. Re-read the article of choice i chose to cite in my essay.
6. Try to interpret the readings and podcasts with a fresh perspective to address in my essay.
My biggest challenge will be relating the quotes sufficiently to the topic of my essay. All the articles support their own ideas fully, but to bring them all together to support the topic of beauty. This is challenging for this essay because the podcasts, as well as the articles, do not directly support my view of beauty.
I plan to use my peers’ comments to help get the advice on how to better integrate ideas into my essay that relate to the quotes. I also plan to email professor Emerson whenever confusion occurs as well as contacting other peers and family members. I plan to read my essay out loud to others and note where confusion occurs and be sure to clarify the topic more clearly.
You have such a thorough plan of attack! I love how you wrote steps you plan to accomplish as you revise your paper. Well done!